Posted by: mameta on: September 21, 2011
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Although it takes time to purchase the goods, I believe online shopping is superior to traditional ways of shopping from afor several reasons.
Firstly, people can order the goods around the clock. Workers sometimes work late at night, and many department stores are closed when they arrived at. Butfinish work. However, online shops are open for all day,day (24/7), hence it is convenient for workers to get thepurchase items.
Secondly, people can purchase goods which they cannot get from nearby stores. Foreign books are usually sold at only at large bookstores. When I lived in xxx, I had to go to large cities to buy foreign books, even if they don’tdidn’t have many kinds of books in English. On the other hand,With online shopping, I can access online book stores like Amazon.co.jp, and I can find what I want to read.
Moreover, online shopping has some merits fromfor the business company. Especiallyonline company selling the goods. It costs less for small companies cost less to advertise their companies through website. Theya website, and they also cut their expense to borrow theexpenses through borrowing space to placedisplay their goods.
In conclusion, shopping using byvia the Internet is more beneficial than the traditional ways even though the time performance is inferior to the traditional ones.
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September 24, 2011 at 10:06 am
Very nice!
I like how your essays are straightforward with a clear, concise point-of-view. What I like most in this essay is how you incorporated an example from your own experience that us readers can relate to. You are right! Foreign (or even vintage) products are very hard to find in a local retail shop, so buying online provides accessibility for everyone.
What else do you purchase online besides books? I also use Amazon to buy books, and movies, and electronics too. However, I am concerned about buying clothes…and even shoes online. I worry about the fit, so I prefer to go to a store and try on an outfit before I purchase it.
Wonderful work! I hope to see more of your interesting essays. They actually get me thinking about topics I sometimes take for granted.
Bye for now!